Somya's Poem

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Somya, what a fantastic poem.

I especially like the use of adjectives (describing words), and how my mind was able to see your dog because it was described it so well with words! I then noticed your picture afterwards. I was mesmerised with the awesome words used. 

Thank you for sharing your work friend. Keep it up :)

Comments

  1. shanaya24 August 2021 at 11:17

    Thanks

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  2. Ellie24 August 2021 at 11:26

    Hi Somya, what a wonderful poem! I can clearly picture your dog because of all of the adjectives you have used. I love the picture you have drawn as well. Great job!

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  3. Miss White24 August 2021 at 11:38

    I love the Rhyming words you used Somya, they really help the poem flow. Ka Pai!

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  4. Penny25 August 2021 at 10:37

    What a beautiful poem and picture Somya. You must be very proud.

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